Rough Cut of Music Video

This is my 'Rough Cut' of my music video. Unfortunately when filming I didn't organize the amount of shots that I needed and wanted to take. This is my 1st rough cut, currently Im improving the rough cut to make it a bit longer and editing it better to re member how to use the software correctly.

As you can see this is my second draft of my rough cut, when I first started to convert my files because of the issue with the software, some of my video files were deleted/were not of an acceptable quality to even put in the rough cut so throughout working on this I had to fill up the time, which at around 4:30 is rather hard to do. So although my video contains lots of repeated shots and clips I am re-filming a good amount of footage.

I also asked my classmates about what they thought of my video. There main response was that it was too bright and didn't fit the mood of the music.

So with the issues I had of converting footage (which became pix-elated anyway) and the feedback I got I decided to do another story board and come up with new ideas to fully fit the genre.